I wish I had the talent to create such beautiful works. It's broadcast quality composition and direction here but the story is rather dull. I think you are a fantastic artist and just wish you took some more time writing or finding a writer to work with.
Haha, yes I am not a writer at all. In fact I acknoledge openly that I suck at comming up with good stories. I devote too much time to the artwork. I've tried to find writers in the past, but without much luck. I also don't want to draw someone else's visions because then I feel like they should be paying me to animate their "awesome" story because then I'm no longer part of the creative process I'm just spending tons of time animating or drawing something they created. As in I'd love someone to write for me, but they need to be willing to let me contribute ideas.
JonDabach
All 2 flash Reviews
Rated 5 / 5 stars March 16, 2006
two hours of fun!!!
Great game. Great work. No suggestions other than please make the second part. Fantastic...had a blast playing it.
I'm glad :) thanks for the comments :D
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars March 1, 2006
beautiful but not compelling
I wish I had the talent to create such beautiful works. It's broadcast quality composition and direction here but the story is rather dull. I think you are a fantastic artist and just wish you took some more time writing or finding a writer to work with.
Haha, yes I am not a writer at all. In fact I acknoledge openly that I suck at comming up with good stories. I devote too much time to the artwork. I've tried to find writers in the past, but without much luck. I also don't want to draw someone else's visions because then I feel like they should be paying me to animate their "awesome" story because then I'm no longer part of the creative process I'm just spending tons of time animating or drawing something they created. As in I'd love someone to write for me, but they need to be willing to let me contribute ideas.